Friday, April 3, 2026

The Trap Of Old Rhymes In A Draught. Comical Poem 759 by Angela Lansbury.

 I'm struggling hard to find escapes

From traps of old and well-known rhymes

Dictionaries delay, like big capes.

Pick words which echo modern times


So let's chuck old rhymes in verse two 

June, moon, tune, noon, protected

Start verse three with a shock that's new

Misheard, absurd, unexpected


From classic poets, much to learn

But I shall censor 'thee' and 'thou'

Like them, make do with modern, 'you'

Invent new similes somehow


Although I always do my best

I start excited in a tiz

A bad start can leave me depressed

I'm not Shakespeare, only one is


No muse can help us pass life's test

Though AI edits all the rest

The way to pass life's daily test

Is starting early at one's desk


Your first draft has cliches, mistakes

But editing is all it takes

Thought can start or follow action

Just start, both bring satisfaction.

-ends-

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