Showing posts with label syllable. Show all posts
Showing posts with label syllable. Show all posts

Sunday, April 17, 2022

What is an iambic pentameter? (Comic Poem number 132)

 



A pentameter is five pairs, five pairs

Just like a dining table with ten chairs



Five children have five pairs of hands, and feet



Five pairs of diners, so ten meet to eat





I am sure you want to know the truth, trust me

I was asked by a friend this week, at last

I've penned up all my knowledge from the past

But now I'm sure my time has come to speak


I'm sure you know duo / duet means two

You know bicycles have two wheels, not more



A tricycle has three wheels, triads - three

And triplets ride trikes with three wheels, yes three



Quadrangle have four angles at four points

Quadruplets have four times the food and fun



The Pentagon has five sides, we're quite near



A pentameter, five metres - we're done.



A human foot has ten toes, so a foot

In poetry or drama, is a verse

Used by the king, villain or chief or boss

The royals speak with rhythm sounding grand



In Shakespeare you can hear the strong heartbeat

'I am the king who rules the wilful waves

I stand, declaim, and claim, this throne, my seat

Behead the wives, beat slaves and kill the knaves


A hero, or anti hero has visions

To be or not to be has a strong beat

Count your beats, like Hamlet, make decisions

Two lots of four or five, your line's complete. 



It's sort of, not quite, no, that can't be right

Poetic feet have two syllables so a pentameter has ten

A meter's just a measure, rhythm, tight -

Maths wasn't my strong point, let's start again



Trochees stamp on first beats, iambic - two

Trochees have a marching sound, dum dee dum

Iambic sounds more like a flowing sea

Iambic flows on, like waves, leaves on trees.


Pentameter have ten beats in five pairs

Iambic like 'I am', stamps on beat two

The emphasis on second syllable 

Just count beats, it's easy for you to do:


You can if you wish use the useful bold

I dare say you could also under line

Or try Italics if that system helps you

I keep on changing systems all the time


The pentagon has five sides I recall

Ten syllables is easier than eight

Short lines to cut can drive you up the wall

For poems, long pentameters are great.


Unstressed, then stressed, unstressed then stressed

Iambic, oh no, oh woe is me. I feel undressed

Unstressed, then stressed, unstressed, then stressed

I was stuck, but now, I am happy, I am impressed.



-ends-

Please share links to your favourite posts.

You can also write songs in six beats and four to make ten syllables per line, as in the Bee Gees' song, First Of May.

Sunday, December 20, 2020

TIME TO PLAN A POETRY YEAR! - Angela's Ten Commandments, Checklist for a poem or poem blog post


 

1 PICK A THEME

 Choose themes for the year, or a them for a blog or book on poetry. Philosophical, comic, historic, news and contemporary, famous people, politicians, presidents, anything you want to learn, anything you want to teach, recipes in verse. 

2 PLAN A REGULAR WRITING TIME

Write early in the day, at lunch time, or at night. You may be able to schedule publication of your posts. Where are most of your readers? In which time zone? Do you want to attract more of them? Or to target others?

3 PLAN A PLACE TO WRITE

A desk. A poetry notebook by your bedside. A poetry notebook in your pocket. Write the page numbers, titles, index, and your vital name and address or email in case you lose the book and want it returned.

4 CHOOSE A TITLE 

Have a page of titles. You could even write the titles for every month for a calendar, or every week, or every day of the years.

5 PLAN PRESENTING OR MARKETING

Read a poem at a meeting, as a time filler if the speaker is late.

6 Check syllable count

7 Check intonation

The most popular is dum dee dum dee

But if you start with the word a or the your sentence becomes dee dum, dee dum 

8 Move the drama to the start and end of each poem and verse

9 Surprise


10 CLARIFY AND FOCUS

If you have two stories, events, ideas, maybe you have two poem. If not, you need a link.

11+

Add facts or links. Author details. References. Credit to photographer for photos. 


Useful Resources

https://simple.wiktionary.org/wiki/Wiktionary:Mai

https://www.wiki-calendar.com/


About the Author

Angela Lansbury is a travel writer and photographer, author and speaker, fashionista. Please share links to your favourite posts or one or more of the blogs

Books include Wedding Speeches and Toasts (Ward Lock/Cassell)

Quick Quotations (Lulu.com) 

travelwithangelalansbury.blogspot.com

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For one hour online individual tutorials or group workshops contact

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