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Showing posts with label frame. Show all posts

Wednesday, October 18, 2023

Pantoum on Sleeping and Siesta comic poem 344 by Angela Lansbury



 I want to work

But my eyes shut

I should not shirk

Stuck in a rut


But my eyes shut

I jerk awake

Stuck in a rut

Woke at daybreak


I jerk awake

I do my best

Woke at daybreak

I need some rest


I do my best

Fight thoughts that keep

I need some rest

I need to sleep


Fight thoughts that keep

Me up since dawn

I need to sleep

Don't speak, just yawn


Me up since dawn

Snooze through daylight

Don't speak just yawn

I'll sleep at night


Snooze through daylight

I should not shirk

I'll sleep at night

I want to work.

-ends-

Useful Websites

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pantun

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pantoum

Please share links to your favourite poems

Fight thoughts that keep me from siesta

Do not want to miss the fiesta.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C3tOrXbJEMk

Monday, September 18, 2023

Life Is A Metaphor comic poem 228 by Angela Lansbury

My friend, please use a metaphor

Or say 'like ...', that's a simile

A metaphor or similar

Comparisons - the same to me


Describe life with a metaphor

It may sound new yet deja view

Tell new friends that we met before

Repeat a lie and it sounds true



Some say life's like a theatre

Some say life's like a big, grand stage

Life's like a book, an empty slate

Life starts like a new, pristine page

Birthday flowers, Singapore. Photo by Angela Lansury


What is baby's new life like?

A train, a bike, a climb, or hike

A river, stream, or waterfall

It's like them all, but yet unlike


You can say life's like a journey

It has many stops and stations

Life's a world which keeps on turning

Life's a team of many nations



Life is like a box of chocolate

A wrapped parcel, a birthday gift

A tall mountain, gushing fountain

Challenging peak, not aimless drift


Life's a swift river, a slow road

A grand palace or small abode

A deck of cards, jigsaw puzzle

A knitting pattern, or muddle



Life is a merry metaphor

Life's a vision, open window

Life's a closing then opened door

Life's seeds breed oasks, grow what you sow


Life has a start, a welcome start

But you can't see around each bend

But we applaud a eulogy

Pretend a satisfying end



Life's like a drunk who is unsure 

Life is a simple metaphor

Life is like a crochet pattern

Like a sea with boats, beach and shore


Life's like a happy, hearty meal

Life's like a long and quenching drink

Life is what flowers make you feel

Life's what animals make you think.

Flowers in Hayes Conference Centre, for Writers' Summer School, Swanwick, Derbyshire England, photo by Angela Lansbury.


Life's like your chosen metophor

Life's like a prose piece or poem

Life's like a novel, or a frame

It leads back where you were before.


You choose and use your metaphor

Your dictionary of words in reach

You picture what you want to teach

For sales, for marketing, a speech.


To impress use a metaphor

To describe any endeavor

Grab one of the common cliches

Metaphors make you sound clever.

-ends-

Please share links to your favourite poems.

Tuesday, March 21, 2023

International Poetry Day - Comic Poem 167



Hail the global Poetry Day! 

Set your syllables in order

Sort old, lost rhymes, blow dust away  

Print a pretty, fern-filled border


Proudly pick out your best poem

Buy, and unwrap, a gold, fine frame

On the wall, enhance your sweet home

In a child's eyes, you have found fame.


The world's best poem is mother's

Like cooking, hers outshines others.

Except gran's historic pleasure

Awesome as a Roman treasure.

-ends-

Copyright Angela Lansbury 2023 March 21st.

Author's comment

The word International pushed the syllable count up to 10 from 8, so I changed the word to global.

I now see other on The Fertile Brains in WhatsApp calling World Poetry Day.  I thought that so long as the correct term was in the title, that was good enough.

A couplet or four line verse is enhanced by a nature scene background or border. 

Unwrap the frame because I often buy a frame which is too good for any item which needs framing. The new frame lies in its dust-defying wrapper.  But if it deserves framing, it deserves a good frame. The old, improved, poem has been elevated to wall status and deserves the special saved frame, which clears clutter. 

Just as every mother and grandmother thinks her toddler's daub is a masterpiece, each child thinks a poem written by an adult and printed is genius. Children's or child's?

I tried alternating the rhymes of the couplets lines in the last verse  from aa bb to abab, but the aa bb made better sense and had more impact. Any purist editor who hates couplets is welcome to move those lines around. So long as I get the credit.