1 Does it have rhythmic beat like marching feet?
2 Does your poem have new, surprising rhyme ?
3 Recall it now, easy as trotting down the street?
4 Read aloud, repeat it another time?
5 Did you smile, adding alliteration?
6 Similes and visual metaphors?
7 Don't randomly cut, lose punctuation
8 It needs more work, add signals, tweak, add more
9 Rewrite, polish till reach a satisfying end
10 Then proudly send to me, your reading friend.
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copyright Angela Lansbury 2023 April 2nd
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