Thursday, September 26, 2024

Birthday Card Comic poem 473 by Angela Lansbury

 You often need bright birthday cards for friends

And cards to show care for close family

Searching's fun, or can drive you round the bend

You can personalise with poetry



What can I make, a big card or small cake

The answer to that question is not hard

Last year I made myself a photo cake

Sometimes I make personal books or cards


Our darling likes sport, goes with her spouse to ski

In ice cold snow winter or melting spring

Won't economise, books the best hotel

Likes silver ear-rings, or diamond rings


She won't waste, sells second-hand, and won't  shirk

While others read books she busily cooks

Daytime, evenings, Sundays she'll plan her work

Buy big events, hats and designer hooks


She walks out to parks, strolls, looks about

But equally she's happy staying in

Loves to eat well, thinks that diets are hell

Only in theory wants to be slim


She's travelled wide, both near and far

She can swim, float, or sunbathe on a boat

She's multi-skilled, drives and parks a big car

Rarely needs sickness pills or antidotes


Keen restaurant owners rush to meet her

They make a fuss of the fussy eater

She checks the contents of every dish

Then her favourite choice is the choicest fish


She's had her share of the world's joys and ills

Counts out strawberries and vitamin pills

She'll phone her parents, video her brother

Her daughter thinks she's the world's best mother


-ends

Copyright Angela Lansbury September 2024

I found that all couplets was doggerel, the rhyme sounded predictable and forces I moved every third line  after the first line so the rhyming scheme changed from aabb to abab. That sounded much better.



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