Showing posts with label sing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label sing. Show all posts

Monday, April 25, 2022

How To Write A Pretty Poem (Comic poem 135)

 

Angela Lansbury reciting poems at poetry night, organized by Alison Chisholm, Writers' Holiday, Fishguard, Wales, UK


How to write a pretty poem?

Very soon we're going to grow

But before you rush to write it

Here are top tips you need to know


Some folks think poems are just verse

Instead of commas, make a break

That's just staccato prose, or worse

Confusing cuts, a half-cooked cake


Poems start with a simple rule

People remember lines which rhyme

This is what I was taught at school

So now I use rhyme all the time


When you stand up, proud to recite

You want to smile and look around

At open mic, or a planned night

Not at your page, the sky, the ground


In the good old days, few could write

They could not read poems nor songs

A chorus repeats - you get it right

Those who recite or sing along


One more thing, alliteration

You repeat a strong first letter

Rhyme and a beat are good enough

Alliteration - even better


You need a beat so words will flow

Grab attention, get feet tapping

Like strong heart beats and nodding heads

So you end up hearing clapping.

-ends-

Tuesday, July 24, 2018

Love is like a cuckoo

Love is like a cuckoo
by Hazel Nutter (aka Angela Lansbury)

Love is like a cuckoo
I love to hear it sing
But other people warn me
It's fun, it's false, it's bling

It wants to shove the others out
It wants to be the one
It does not care for others
When all is said and done

A cuckoo starts off small
But it grows big and hungry
You race about to feed it
It's ungrateful - and angry!
Cuckoo from Wikipedia.


If you suspect a cuckoo
What is it you should do?
Make sure you are not cuckoo
And the cuckoo's not with you.

-ends-
Copyright Angela Lansbury.
Photo by Per Harald Olsen.

Poem inspired by Dolly Parton's Love Is like a Butterfly.
I watched a butterfly flutter past and thought, just write a song starting  LOVE IS, making a metaphor from something you see. My first thought was bird.

I thought of names of birds, Magpie, Robin, cuckoo. Cuckoo offered the greatest opportunities for puns and metaphors. I might try Robin next.
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Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Travellers Searching




Travellers Searching
by Angela Lansbury

I was always looking for another
I was searching for the perfect lover
Somebody else, that special somebody
But the secret of joy was down to me

My parents let me go said they were glad
I’d travel and see things they never had
Things were better when I wrote a letter
Only later I knew that they’d been sad

I thought that I had found the perfect lover
He said he’d leave his family for me
I promised I’d stay friends right to the end
But first I’d go home to my family

I knew my childhood home was the winner
I arrived just in time, one last dinner
My lover wasn’t cold but soon sick and old
My dreams of a new home were not to be

My childhood’s in this faded photograph
My parents are happy and we all laugh
I know that happiness is home all the while
So I smile at small children, wave and smile,

I sit contented in my rocking chair
I’m just happy to know carers are there
Work and the world’s riches don’t worry me
I’m happy with my friends and family..

Alternative ending
I chant, sing and rock endless in my chair
I gratefully grab carers who stand there
Work, rain and riches no longer knock me
My lottery win's friends and family.

-ends-
Copyright Angela Lansbury
2016 March 23rd

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